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Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 15 Apr 2021, 06:03
by Designer Anthony
Hello everyone!
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This is my first pack with shading, the Seattle Residential Pack!

This pack is inspired by buildings from Seattle. This pack contains 5-6 buildings (7 in next update). It would be in Residential TT. It ranges from 68-439 inhabitants.

THIS IS MY BEST WORK EVER! IT TOOK ME AT LEAST 2 TO 3 DAYS TO MAKE THIS PLUGIN.

Advice/Feedback/Critism are all accepted.

Any suggestions?

Bye! :space
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Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 15 Apr 2021, 06:15
by Bearbear76
Some of the shadows are wrong. It should be on the right. :)

Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 15 Apr 2021, 07:13
by ajimaul
your building is great but add more texture on the building to make it look more realistic

Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 15 Apr 2021, 12:43
by The26
this isn't bad, but the roofs look odd and there's a lack of noise, windows are kinda eh...

Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 16 Apr 2021, 16:13
by AdmiralCarl
Make the texture rough. Add some same colors but in different level or hue and sprinkle it all over the texture

Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 16 Apr 2021, 17:18
by Designer Anthony
AdmiralCarl wrote:
16 Apr 2021, 16:13
Make the texture rough. Add some same colors but in different level or hue and sprinkle it all over the texture
just keep it like that.

Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 17 Apr 2021, 17:03
by Bernardo Brandão
Designer Anthony wrote:
15 Apr 2021, 06:03
Hello everyone!
Cerritos_21-04-14_20.55.32.png
This is my first pack with shading, the Seattle Residential Pack!

This pack is inspired by buildings from Seattle. This pack contains 5-6 buildings (7 in next update). It would be in Residential TT. It ranges from 68-439 inhabitants.

THIS IS MY BEST WORK EVER! IT TOOK ME AT LEAST 2 TO 3 DAYS TO MAKE THIS PLUGIN.

Advice/Feedback/Critism are all accepted.

Any suggestions?

Bye! :space

seattle.zip
I will give you some advices that I would love to have received when I was starting out: making plugins for Theo Town is good, but making GOOD plugins for Theo Town is even better. You seem to have a lot of desire to make plugins, but your work doesn't have a lot of quality, you can improve it! Here are some recommendations for you:
  • Shadows! Your plugins need shade and this is not a detail, it is essential! The right side of the building must be darker, okay?

  • The roofs need to be more detailed! Even if the building has a beautiful facade, if the roof is strange it makes it weird. Add antennas, lightning rods and other roofing stuff.

  • Noise! Your buildings really need it! This will make them look more real and less plastic. (In this case, noise is a small variation in color tones)


I hope you are not offended, I am just giving you advice for you to improve.

Sincerely,
Bernardo Brandão

Re: Seattle Residential Pack

Posted: 17 Apr 2021, 21:29
by THEMAX
That's great, you are getting better at that, you might need to work a bit on the windows & shadings but i can give advices on those fairly easily. Try to do some better ones by yourself and if you need help, i am there.